First all I would like to express my gratitude for the opportunity you offer to any one to be granted. As you can see from my CV I earned a BSc degree in networking and data communication. During the three years of study at the university, I had received rigorous theoretical and practical training in Networking and data communication .I worked for Ethiopian In statute of Agricultural Research under Forestry research Center for around 2 years as network technician. Currently I have been worked as Junior IT expert at Engineering Capacity Building Program (ecbp). My responsibilities are much more extended that what I was serving at the forestry Research Center.

I would like to be granted the NFP because by winning this precious scholarship I can take part in my MSc program of Geo-Information Science at Wageningen University, the Netherlands .The reason for choosing this specific Master program is comes from various reasons. First this MSc program is extremely suitable with my interest and I believe that continue my studies in order to gain knowledge and experience by academic research. I believe a master degree in GIS would offer me the possibility of receiving the complete picture of all aspect of the field. In addition to this in men dominating society, I have also strong desire to be a role model women researcher in the field of GIS .Secondly reason, I will get a chance to through NFP scholarship to interact with students from diverse professional, social and cultural backgrounds drawn from all over the world. In addition having a chance to study in the Netherlands means I will have opportunity to approach and experience one of the best educational system in the world.

The current status in the development of GIS in our country is far from what the world is reached so I believe obtaining a master’s degree will provide the necessary background to anticipate and react to ever changing GIS development.

Just to give you a gist of my personal traits, I am motivated and self driven individual who functions effectively under pressure. I am very ambitious and my ambition is matched by strong collaborative sprit. I enjoy helping others as well as learning from others when ever the opportunity is afforded. I can quickly adapt to the changing circumstances of the work environment, and also to establish and maintain good working relations with individuals of different cultures and back grounds. I am looking forward to the opportunity that the grant will offer me with more opportunities to study with people of with more opportunity to study people of different social and cultural back grounds

I have one suggestion,and that is refrain from using the word "I" as often as you have.Use your
Imagination to rewrite some of your sentences in a way that the word "I",is not the first word of sentence.There are errors in syntax that should be corrected.The last sentence is one example.
You have used people and opportunity twice




One Response to “I am writing motivation letter to bee granted please anyone can give me suggestion?”

  1. Socrates1944 Says:

    I have one suggestion,and that is refrain from using the word "I" as often as you have.Use your
    Imagination to rewrite some of your sentences in a way that the word "I",is not the first word of sentence.There are errors in syntax that should be corrected.The last sentence is one example.
    You have used people and opportunity twice
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